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In Love with the TEARS

26 Oct

btw, this was me writing in the perspective of someone I knew who became depressed & went crazy. I was trying to understand her perspective & why she did what she had. I stopped, because twisted thinking shouldn’t be practiced on purpose… but still, the result(this poem) is really interesting.

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Then through the tears

she looked up & shrugged a sigh.

Her eyes had ripples

As she finally said it right….

Listen, im sorry for it all

For everything I’ve done

I don’t know why I did it

I don’t know why I run

I never meant to hurt you

I just wanted you to listen

& I couldn’t find the words

you didn’t think it was important…

so I found a way to bring tears

tears are good, u know?

because tears are real & true

tears cleanse the soul

tears bring healing

tears bring confessions

tears bring forgiveness

tears bring relief

i guess im just in love with the tears

im in love with crying

but, I just cant cry tonight, and believe me

I am trying….

I’ll cut my arms,

& I’ll make up lies,

i’ll blame innocents,

just to make someone cry

i don’t want to see any real pain

just know that im still alive.

I just want to cry.

But there’s no tears left tonight…

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3 Comments

Posted by on October 26, 2011 in Poetry

 

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3 responses to “In Love with the TEARS

  1. giant twist comfort cs

    November 12, 2011 at 1:15 pm

    Your weblog is among the far better blogs Ive came across in months. Thank you for your posts and all of the finest together with your function and weblog. Searching forward to reading new entries!

     
  2. Alfred

    November 17, 2011 at 5:08 am

    The very core of your writing while appearing agreeable in the beginning, did not sit well with me personally after some time. Somewhere throughout the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer unfortunately only for a very short while. I however have got a problem with your leaps in logic and you would do well to fill in all those gaps. When you actually can accomplish that, I will surely be impressed.

     
    • unwrittentruth

      November 17, 2011 at 10:48 pm

      I actually shortened the original poem. It was darker & a little scary… Thank you for your real feedback though. I really appreciate it.

       

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