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Epic double sword

06 Jun

A mysterious hope for demise or salvation, is all i can afford
my double lifes are cut deep into the edges of my soul’s sword…
a dark heart plotting demise & crushing humanity’s ways
versus the sweet subtle hope i find glowing in simple praise…

I’ve become too complex to decode my own heart
with spontaneous fires and storms, in waters i can’t chart…
i don’t know which side of me is wrong & which is right,
all I know, is that soon there shall be an epic fight…

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5 responses to “Epic double sword

  1. Daan van den Bergh

    June 7, 2013 at 7:31 am

    And you will be ready, and you will prevail.

     
  2. piercingthroughthewinds

    June 7, 2013 at 10:44 am

    Wow! Intense 😛

     
    • unwrittentruth

      June 8, 2013 at 7:30 pm

      thanks, i was definitely feeling & going for intense with this one. so thank you

       
  3. Da Absentee

    June 7, 2013 at 5:16 pm

    Great closing!

     
    • unwrittentruth

      June 8, 2013 at 7:31 pm

      Thanks! i try for a strong closing, and usually they end up weakly acceptable, but on this one, i was pretty satisfied. But it meant a lot on this one, it pretty much sums up my life right now. thank you

       

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